Maybe try a change of contrast for the ending. I see you have a bright light at the end, but it needs something more, maybe the sun is out and shining when you get outside, and it's a total change in scale (as in for the begining of the vide it feels like we are in this city tunnel, but then we get outside a realise it was actually tiny, or something like that)
And what happened to your blocks flying away at the end? Can that still happen? That was a great idea. Maybe the blocks are like pieces of the city, that all shatter and get sucked away.
Yeah that's looking great!
ReplyDeleteMaybe try a change of contrast for the ending. I see you have a bright light at the end, but it needs something more, maybe the sun is out and shining when you get outside, and it's a total change in scale (as in for the begining of the vide it feels like we are in this city tunnel, but then we get outside a realise it was actually tiny, or something like that)
And what happened to your blocks flying away at the end? Can that still happen? That was a great idea. Maybe the blocks are like pieces of the city, that all shatter and get sucked away.
Maybe. :)
But looking swell overall.